Email Construction
In my book, bad email content is one of the greatest goofs, many examples we encounter end up in our Good, Bad, Iffy reviews for Service In Action or Panel of Peers events. Without including photos of offenders, I though I’d give a few pointers on how to avoid content mistakes:
- Print ≠ Email – I have a few examples in this category, either an entire brochure has been put into an email, or the entire website is restated. Keep it simple and targeted, you can always continue with a click through. The best tip here would be around 300 words (if it’s informative), maybe 50 characters each if you’re attempting to sell multiple products. FYI – my opening paragraph is 50 words, 228 characters without spaces (277 with.)
- Get to the Point – Related to the previous point, you sometimes wonder what the message is attempting to accomplish, is it selling, informing, recruiting or simply attempting to entertain. This where graphics play a role – the “click here” option is vital in some messages, just the subliminal urge is all that’s keeping you from complete confused frustration (and for the record, the button is more at home above the fold.)
- Keeps Going… and going – Ever receive a message that requires unnecessary scrolling? Yeah me too, I’ve gotten the most graphic-heavy newsletters with small while text on a multi-shade black and blue background. If printed, the email would be seven pages. Although allusive, I’ve also received messages that required left/ right scrolling. There are a couple schools of thought here but the most accepted width is 600 pixels and the height should be maybe double that… if you have more, I’d suggest separate messages and interesting copy to inspire click throughs.
- Read Carefully – You can always tell when email text has been copied from word and pasted into the graphics program, usually because there a few odd characters included (apostrophes and dashes are usually the first hit.) Proof-read and have others proof-read, you may catch misspellings too.
- Know thy Target – It should go without saying, but emailing for the sake of sending is pretty pointless. This is where segmentation and customer insight is crucial – otherwise you’re firing blind. I recently received a very well written email from my credit card company reminding me about their online services and inviting me to visit the portal… only trouble is that I cancelled the credit card seven months ago.
Again, these are just a few points to consider... otherwise, you may end up in our presentations!




